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now for the rating
Vision 2.5 stars, while the message you were trying to convey shows through the model's expression, it's there and I feel it, the X'ed shadow across her face, and distracting background take away from it.
Originality: 3 stars the angle of the photograph, and the slight tilt of models head in my opinion is flattering and all in all very well executed.
Technique: 1.5 stars goes back to what I said about the distracting shadow across the models face, the un needed out of focus vine lined with the purple flowers, and the two different backgrounds, try choosing a different location with a smooth background one that will lift the beauty of the model up instead of take away from it.
Impact: you can see the beauty of the model and see she's trying to tell you something through the gaze in her eyes and tilt of her head, but the location doesn't lift that story up and help grab you a long with the model.
hope this helped you and I look forward to seeing more keep doing what you do!
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